Mayfield: A Saga

September 17, 2005

Akunaga — Chapter 1

It wasn’t long before Taro started to spend all of his spare time with Marisa, but he was not happy because of one thing. He was unable to drive her around to the various “hang-out” spots downtown. So, thanks to my suggestion, Taro secured himself an after school job. It was nothing major, but he really enjoyed the job and the extra money. He became a Disc-Jockey at the Sugar Cube Bowling Alley.

Thanks to this job, Taro was able to meet many new friends and soon the phone was ringing off the hook. If it wasn’t for Samuru (who also seemed to be making many friends) it was for Taro. I must say, I am definitely proud of my son. After a while, Taro saved up enough money to purchase his very first vehicle! He spent days searching all of the local auto-marts, and finally came home with a used, bright-red pickup truck. I have never been as proud of my son as I was the day I saw him drive up in his very own car.

The very night he purchased his new truck, Taro called up Marisa and arranged to pick her up for a night on the town. I couldn’t help but smile as my son pulled away, out of the driveway. When he got home that night, he excitedly told me all about his evening. Having been a teenager once myself, I am pretty sure he left out some of the details of the evening! But it sounded like they had a good time together playing pool and going bowling. I may have a daughter-in-law pretty soon!

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  1. I’m really looking forward to reading more! You’ve really thought through your characters’ history, and it shows.

    Comment by Annette — September 18, 2005 @ 4:30 am

  2. Such a great beginning and the photos are clever and appropriate. Nice job.

    Comment by Amanda — September 18, 2005 @ 12:43 pm

  3. Aww such a sweet update. I like the fact that you included some of their home language into this and his misunderstandings about marisa chen haha. Quite funny indeed. I also like that you included the Nightlife aspect of things. And i was surpried that one of the characters had on the dress that somebody designed. Quite Interesting indeed. Haha i feel so happy for that person. Great update.

    Comment by Eva — September 18, 2005 @ 1:42 pm

  4. Oh this looks to be good.
    Now I’ve heard about the Prosperity Challenge but have no idea of what it entails. Where can I find info on it as I’m getting close to gener. 8 in my legacychallenge and itching for something new .

    Comment by PRMami — September 20, 2005 @ 12:57 am

  5. Thanks for the comments guys! Sorry it’s been a bit since my last update. I’ve had a hectic week in school (tests and papers due in every class!) But I hope to have another update soon!

    PRMami - There’s a yahoo group for the Prosperity Challenge that I got the info from. Here’s the address:
    http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/prosperity_challenge/

    It’s a fun challenge and it helps keep the game interesting b/c you get to play with multiple families! Hope you enjoy it!

    Comment by Administrator — September 20, 2005 @ 8:27 pm

  6. Wow, this is awesome so far! Great job with Kin’s “voice”; it was entertaining and very well-written! Also love the pics. Gotta love the jumping car. ;-)

    Comment by Jen — September 20, 2005 @ 11:22 pm

  7. Awww, this is a great story! I reeeeally enjoyed it. Thanks for putting a lot of pics i liked ‘em. :D

    Comment by Jeanne — September 24, 2005 @ 8:05 pm

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