Akunaga — Chapter 1
By the time our food came, I couldn’t wait any longer. I withdrew the black box containing a nice sized diamond engagement ring, out of my jacket pocket and placed it on the table in front of Vyn. She covered her mouth to stifle her surprised scream. But I could see the answer in her eyes before she even opened the box.
She gently opened the box, examined the ring, and slid it on her slender finger. With a huge smile on her face, she placed her hand on top of mine. My hear wanted to burst. Thus is the beginning of a new life!
I’m really looking forward to reading more! You’ve really thought through your characters’ history, and it shows.
Comment by Annette — September 18, 2005 @ 4:30 am
Such a great beginning and the photos are clever and appropriate. Nice job.
Comment by Amanda — September 18, 2005 @ 12:43 pm
Aww such a sweet update. I like the fact that you included some of their home language into this and his misunderstandings about marisa chen haha. Quite funny indeed. I also like that you included the Nightlife aspect of things. And i was surpried that one of the characters had on the dress that somebody designed. Quite Interesting indeed. Haha i feel so happy for that person. Great update.
Comment by Eva — September 18, 2005 @ 1:42 pm
Oh this looks to be good.
Now I’ve heard about the Prosperity Challenge but have no idea of what it entails. Where can I find info on it as I’m getting close to gener. 8 in my legacychallenge and itching for something new .
Comment by PRMami — September 20, 2005 @ 12:57 am
Thanks for the comments guys! Sorry it’s been a bit since my last update. I’ve had a hectic week in school (tests and papers due in every class!) But I hope to have another update soon!
PRMami - There’s a yahoo group for the Prosperity Challenge that I got the info from. Here’s the address:
http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/prosperity_challenge/
It’s a fun challenge and it helps keep the game interesting b/c you get to play with multiple families! Hope you enjoy it!
Comment by Administrator — September 20, 2005 @ 8:27 pm
Wow, this is awesome so far! Great job with Kin’s “voice”; it was entertaining and very well-written! Also love the pics. Gotta love the jumping car.
Comment by Jen — September 20, 2005 @ 11:22 pm
Awww, this is a great story! I reeeeally enjoyed it. Thanks for putting a lot of pics i liked ‘em.
Comment by Jeanne — September 24, 2005 @ 8:05 pm